第1867天：熙熙的玩具，英文人物动作描写
第1867天 英语超级写作奶爸，5.1年双语日记记录女儿生活
截止本篇：第23本
中英合计：117.5万字 英文47.8万字，中文69.7万字
《云朵儿日记》
第1867天(5.1年) 1月23日（一）
Day 1867, Jan 23, (Mon)
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This was a daytrip, so to speak, to the village where Xixi’s laolao lives. Astonishing, bewildering, fascinating – Xixi’s toys deserve such adjectives, simply leaving you dazzled and blowing your mind. A trampoline and a tractor even!. Kids today luxuriate in all conceivable attention. That was redolent of the lean era when I almost had nothing to play with as a kid, one when poking around for scrapped cigarette packaging in garbage sites after school or hunting crickets in the fields in the outskirts of Xi’an was a simple delight for me and my peers. Now, for you it was time to be in with the toys!
今天可以说是熙熙姥姥家的一日游，那是一个小村子。令人惊叹、目不暇接、引人入胜，熙熙的玩具想怎么形容都可以，你都看不过来了，激动不已。甚至还有个蹦床和拖拉机。今天的孩子太幸福了。想起我小时候没什么玩儿的，对于我和小伙伴们而言放学后到垃圾堆捡废弃的烟盒（烟的外包装）、到西安边儿上的农田里抓蛐蛐儿就是快乐。现在，是你尽情享受玩具的时刻。
趣味表达和俚语：
-daytrip 一日游
-dazzle 使眼花缭乱
-so to speak 可以说
-blow one’s mind 令人印象深刻
-luxuriate 享受
-redolent 使想起
-poke 戳
-scrap 遗弃
-peer 同龄人
-be in with 与…有交情
胡鑫宇的英文水平到底怎么样？看一个人的英语水平，英语作文最能说明问题。
胡鑫宇英文作文第一句话是“the story moved me a lot”。首先这句话时态有问题，应该是现在完成时，而不是过去式，表示过去影响到现在较为合适。其次，a lot一般修饰有形的物体，受故事的很大感动，抽象的修改成 greatly，再高级的将move修改成touch。
“it was my birthday gift”这句，my与后面的my father重复，应该修改为“as a birthday gift，it was given by my father”。
第三句“ i am active to go out”，似乎很别扭，active替换成inclined是稳妥的。
还有丢自行车那句“it disappeared”,显然不应该这么表述，自行车不会自己主动消失，disappeared应该作为表语，表示状态，修改为“it was disappeared”比较合适。
还有停机动车可以用“park”，但自行车要用place，摆放，stop似乎也可以。
综合以上分析，胡鑫宇的英文水准，从词汇量、语法、用词准确度来看属于中考水平。确实以这种能力应付高中考试，有些吃力。或许这就是他说的“新环境真的难适应”的原因吧。
第1866天：兔年第一天照片，英文人物动作描写
第1866天 英语超级写作奶爸，5.1年双语日记记录女儿生活
截止本篇：第23本
中英合计：117.5万字 英文47.8万字，中文69.7万字
《云朵儿日记》
第1866天(5.1年) 1月22日（日）
Day 1866, Jan 22, (Sun)
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This is the first day of the first lunar month of the Year of Rabbit. You were rigged out in red, and mummy edited a number of your shots - where you looked your best - in a way that did justice to the Year of Rabbit
今天是农历兔年1月1日的第一天。你穿上了红色衣服。妈妈为你编辑了一些兔年主题的照片，你照得还挺好看的。
趣味表达和俚语：
-lunar 月亮的
- rig out 穿某种衣服
- shot 照片
- look one’s best 展示最好一面
- do justice to 公平对待
I suddenly have a great idea. From today on, I'll keep an English diary every day. I realize that's a good way to improve myself. Do you agree with me?
For example, I can write something about my daily life, Such as What I eat and what I do in a day.
This morning I cooked a delicious breakfast for my family and I. In fact，there are only my husband and I at home. Because my child Is working outside our city.
Because of COVID-19 pandemic， I Haven't Work for several days. I even not went out to buy food at the market. So there is nothing much left in my fridge.
But don't worry, I still have something to eat. I have some noodles, some meat, some eggs and some vegetables.
This morning I decide to cook some vegetables for me and for my husband.
I put some cold water in the pan, Heat it, Put an tomato into it, Then took it out and peeled it,cut it up.
I added some noodles into the hot water. After about 10 minutes. I added some meat and an egg and the tomato pieces. And cook for another two minutes.
At last I put some Chopped green onion into it.
It smells nice, It tastes delicious!
There's only an egg in the Noodles. So I left it for my husband, I only eat a bowl of noodles with some meat ,some potatoes and a little chopped green onion.
Look at my pictures, How do you like them? Is my breakfast delicious?
I hope to work soon. I hope everything will go well.#英语日记# #学英语# #努力的人#
It's great to be great , but it's greater to be human. ---W. Rogers
成为伟人固然伟大，但成为真正的人更加伟大.#生活日记#
