工作类话题题目:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
思路分析:
1.话题引入:选出作文命题中的关键词(一般为名词),进行背景描述,引入话题
2.他人观点:第二步有三种处理方法。陈述对立观点、叙述双方观点或保留双方观点
3.亮明观点:第三句话明确给出本文总观点
4.尾句过渡:用固定句式进行开头段与主体段的过渡
开头段范文:
Everyone in the society is seeking for success in career, but what is the key factor of becoming successful? There are two choices – good networking and hardworking. Although someone tends to choose the first aspect, I definitely agree that hardworking at school should be a key factor of success. 圧椀琀栀漀甀琀 hardworking at school, success in the future cannot be guaranteed.
范文解析:
1.根据题干内容,选取关键词success, future job, relate well to people or study hard at school。开头句作为话题引入,先描述当前背景,即社会上的每个人都追求事业成功,但成功的关键因素是什么?第二句对应题干信息,指出有两种选择——良好的人际关系还是努力学习。
2.该步骤采取了陈述对立观点的方法,Although … 指出有人认为良好的人际关系对于事业成功更重要。
3.I definitely agree that直接引出作者的态度,即在学校努力学习是成功的关键因素,亮出文章的总观点。
4.最后一句,作为对整体段落内容上的收尾,并且引出下文来支持作者观点的理由。
开头段所涉及词汇讲解(工作类)
seek for success in career 追求事业上的成功
the key factor of… …的关键因素
good networking 良好的人际关系
cannot be guaranteed 无法保证